
SUMMER NIGHT
Moonlight
Girls’ laughter
Flash of fireflies

SUMMER NIGHT
Moonlight
Girls’ laughter
Flash of fireflies
Look here:
Must come back to this one. I’ve been writing more non poetry these days and have a hundred stories in my head.
And another image I especially like.
iPhone app blog post #2. How did I do?
Enjoy ! 
Maybe that number is a charm.
I do remember the number 2,500, though. That was the number of contacts it took to find a full time teacher job.
Wait. No… that was when I stopped counting.
Did I get a full time teaching job? Yes I did. Took five years of hard work, and many jobs in the meantime. I learned something from each job. The year I had five part-time jobs was exhausting–but I loved each job. I’m too old for that now, I think. My head would spin when I checked my calendar.
And this is just a photo I really like. Yay to beautiful clouds!
Best wishes to all. 
And from the Iphone app no less!
Why Strangers Wept
Did darkness heal or was it
holding hands at noon
with a small boy who
needed a nap?
Was it the sun
or the silence of the moon
that lifted it all, just a bit.
Maybe it was someone
who remembers
the smaller child and knew
why strangers wept.
On the street, a young girl
skipped then ran then walked
while humming, purple ribbon
escaping black hair.
Thirteen poems and one piece of nonfiction are “out” for consideration. I’ve submitted to established literary journals as well as journals about to publish their FIRST issue!
My goal, however, is to read and write more. That’s how I can learn and grow as a writer and a person, I believe. While it’s fun to submit, it can overtake the important activities of actually reading good literature and writing more.
Do you find submitting pieces of writing helps your writing or hinders it?
Good luck to those who are submitting! I’ll keep posting links to new sites I find. I have found the “Discover” feature of Submittable.com to be helpful in finding new (to me) sites, and then those sites lead to more sites.
Thanks for reading.
Laura Lee
published a winning poem today, “DRPK US” written in a Twin Cinema poetic form. While I have read poems before that can be read horizontally or vertically, I’ve not seen such a structuring before nor seen a label for this form.
In The Straits Times, writer Olivia Ho writes that a Twin Cinema poem is:
It is a poem written in two columns. Sometimes, the columns are meant to be read individually, running line by line in counterpoint.
But I find it at its most compelling when the poet achieves not just two, but three ways of reading it, not just top to bottom, but also across, a poem at once broken and unbroken, reaching across the gaps to put a new twist on opposing meanings.
In a blog about Southeast Asian Poetic Forms (find it here: Southeast Asian Poetic Forms
notes that:
In its original form as developed by Yeow Kai Chai, the twin cinema consisted of two discrete columns of poetry. The columns were separate and did not read as a coherent line across both columns. Each individual line of a column contained imagery that could correlate or contrast to the opposing line of the other column.
I love this playing with both the oral aspects of poetry and the physical/ white space aspects.
I’ve written specular poems, or sometimes called mirror poems that read as poems from the first to the last line and then from the last to the first line. That was tricky and worthwhile; both versions of the poem need to make grammatical, syntactical, and poetic sense.
What verse forms have you tried? What’s your favorite?
Thanks for reading.
Laura Lee
I do enjoy tracking my submissions via submittable.com. If you are a writer, this site makes it quite easy to submit your writing and to track it: Submittable
If you don’t yet have an account, you can set up a free account and enter your author bio in a matter of minutes.
Yesterday I wrote outside of my genre and submitted a peace poem and a short nonfiction piece written totally in dialogue. Six submissions this week, three rejections.
It was fun to try writing entirely in dialogue; good thing I’ve listened to teens talk over the years!
How are your submissions going?
Thanks for reading, writers!
Laura Lee
Writers! Perhaps you knew about this great feature of Submittable, but I did not until today. Submittable.com is a site where some publishers collect submissions to journals and contests, reply to the writers, accept submissions, reject submissions. It’s a way to read submissions “blindly,” without seeing an author’s name.
I like using Submittable, since it also helps me keep track of what piece of writing I’ve submitted where.
What I just discovered, however, is a great find: the “discover” section of the website. There I found many journals listing their requirements, deadlines, etc. All in one place.
I also found sites I now like to read from (is that the term…read from? Read there?)
So, writers, if you haven’t discovered the DISCOVER feature of Submittable yet, here you go: Discover Opportunities Submittable. If you don’t have an account there yet, you will need to create a free account.
What are some useful writing tools you have discovered?
Thanks for reading!
Laura Lee

Parking here to edit and revise
Belied
The woods, late spring
pond at sunsets
bat-skimmed surface
white tail pulled down
new leaves. The hawk flew low
as well.
Over the walking path
my shadow squat and low
No wings
no hooves, no wild thing.
Even the blue jay flew low
that night, while grasshoppers
jumped quickly across the path
my short shadowed sadness and dread
belied the flood of gold.
The informative and often fun site, ThoughCo.com published an article about the Oxford of serial comma here: ThoughtCo.com Article on the Oxford Comma .
This comma is known as the Oxford Comma, the Harvard Comma, and more commonly, the serial comma.
But what is this hot topic punctuation mark? As the author Richard Nordquist writes,
The Oxford comma is the comma that precedes the conjunction before the final item in a list of three or more items:
I just love those examples!
ThoughtCo.com believes the serial comma should be used unless the style manual a writer is using advises against it.
I have to love a “fiercely debated” punctuation mark! What do you think? Where do you stand on this hot topic?
Laura Lee